Find Your Voice
Find Your Voice
Objectives
In this lesson, students will sharpen their awareness of their own voice in writing. Students will:
- sharpen their skills in word choice.
- practice expressing themselves in a precise manner.
- practice using a variety of sentence structures and sentence openings.
- compose their own passages, imitating the models of noted authors.
- maintain a portfolio of their work.
- identify the characteristics of an effectively written passage.
- respond to the writing of their classmates.
- revise their own writing, applying what they have learned about effective writing.
- evaluate their own writing, using a rubric.
Essential Questions
- What role does writing play in our lives?
- How do we develop into effective writers?
- To what extent does the writing process contribute to the quality of the writing?
Vocabulary
- Writing Process: Step-by-step phases that guide a learner through the selection of a topic, understanding of the purpose, drafting, editing, revising, and “publication” of a finished work.
- Descriptive Writing: The clear description of people, places, objects, or events using appropriate details. An effective description will contain sufficient and varied elaboration of details to communicate a sense of the subject being described. Details used are usually sensory and selected to describe what the writer sees, hears, smells, touches, and tastes.
- Topic: The main organizing principle of a discussion, either verbal or written.
- Purpose: The reason why students are writing. Notice that selecting the form for writing (e.g., list, report, essay, letter) is one of the choices that helps the writer achieve the writing’s purpose. Writers also have choices about style, organization, and kinds of evidence that help achieve the purpose.
- Audience: An audience is a group of readers who reads a particular piece of writing. As writers, students should anticipate the needs or expectations of the audience in order to convey information or argue for a particular claim.
- Metaphor: The comparison of two unlike things in which no words of comparison (like or as) are used (e.g., That new kid in class is really a squirrel.).
- Simile: A comparison of two unlike things in which a word of comparison (like or as) is used (e.g., She eats like a bird.).
- Figurative Language: Language that cannot be taken literally since it was written to create a special effect or feeling.
- Sensory Details: The use of words and phrases that appeal to the five senses. Writers use sensory details to help readers imagine how things look, feel, smell, sound, and taste.
- Tone: The attitude of the author toward the audience and subject (e.g., playful, critical, ominous, wistful)
Duration
100–150 minutes/2–3 class periods
Prerequisite Skills
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Materials
- copies of passages for style and tone, such as:
- a three-paragraph excerpt from My Ántonia by Willa Cather, Book I, available at http://www.gutenberg.org/catalog/world/readfile?fk_files=270853&pageno=9%20
- a two-paragraph excerpt from To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee, pp. 5–6, beginning with “Maycomb was an old town. . .” and ending with “. . .fear itself.” available at http://www.foldedspace.org/weblog/2005/12/in_praise_of_regional_writing.html
- copies of the rubric that will be used to evaluate the description of a startling moment. For example, you can use the PSSA Writing Scoring Guidelines (L-C-3-3_PSSA Writing Scoring Guidelines.pdf), also available at http://www.portal.state.pa.us/portal/server.pt/community/pennsylvania_system_of_school_assessment_(pssa)/8757/resource_materials/507610; refer to the sample rubric (L-C-3-3_Sample Rubric.doc); or compose your own rubric.
- a board, large screen, or easel with a large drawing pad to put up examples and student responses
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- “Writing About Writing: An Extended Metaphor Assignment” by Traci Gardner. Readwritethink. IRA/National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE), 2010
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DRAFT 03/15/2012